I have noticed a few things that I need you to know
But I don’t want you to feel obliged to respond
So I’ll write you a note
In fact, you may notice that I wrote you a few
I’ll leave your notes in a public place
Other people will notice them
And I’ll pray that your friends are quiet
So that they don’t make my notes un-noteworthy
Then I’ll write you one more note
I’ll hold onto it until I notice you able to notice me
Then I’ll leave you THIS note
And hold my breath that you notice my noteworthy notes
A Noteworthy Note
August 22, 2007I have noticed a few things that I need you to know
But I don’t want you to feel obliged to respond
So I’ll write you a note
In fact, you may notice that I wrote you a few
I’ll leave your notes in a public place
Other people will notice them
And I’ll pray that your friends are quiet
So that they don’t make my notes un-noteworthy
Then I’ll write you one more note
I’ll hold onto it until I notice you able to notice me
Then I’ll leave you THIS note
And hold my breath that you notice my noteworthy notes
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Poetry / Creative Writing
Tags: Creative Writing, Paul Seele, Poetry
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